Obeisances to God

Obeisances to God

A Poem by Praveeta

When things were falling apart
When things were beyond my control
And I was helpless
You intervened

You showed me the light
You gave me the courage
To withstand any obstacles
That came my way

Thank you God
For your guidance and support
For without your help
I would not be the person
I am today


© 2014 Praveeta



Author's Note

Praveeta
Just when I was thinking what to pen today, thoughts of our creator flooded my mind.

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A beautiful tribute to the Invisible One who guides us in our path. Well written Praveeta :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review.
Without God's help, we would not have existed on this beautiful planet. The poem is very beautiful and it really shows the great faith and gratitude towards our Lord! :D

Kami

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kami. I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Amen sister. Keeping the faith and heralding it publicly it dutiful and gratifying. Wonderful job

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you Xavier. I appreciate your time and feedback.
I used to be a woman of faith but for some reasons, I drifted away from God. I admire how you were able to restore a single spark in me through this poem. Thank you. You have a beautiful soul, Praveeta.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words. I am deeply humbled by them.
Dear Praveeta,

Just as simple as, lesson of a Bible yet as beautiful as a young blossomed flower.

Great and positive thought.

Stay blessed
Prodical

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and lovely review.
Amen! This is a fantastic poem! Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the read and review.
"Thank you God
For your guidance and support
For without your help
I would not be the person
I am today"

Gratitude and thanks...Bravo.................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sami.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........................
An uplifting spiritual poem. Heartfelt and thankful. May God bless you and your family...:)...................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the read, lovely review and blessings. May God's blessings be upon you always... read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You too dear one...:)...................
A beautiful and positive poem. No-one can walk alone in life. Need faith and hope to keep us strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. I highly appreciate it.
it is true that we seek the support of God at needs, and forgets at plenty. good poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review.

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