MAGIC

Momentary visions
Ascending thoughts
Gripping the senses
Invoking the spirit
Chills me!

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Magic not an attribute of the Savior but a craft of Satan so I am confused as to the idea of the poem. It's the title and line Ascending thoughts that has me wondering is this going towards God or away from him? Please excuse my candor as I know it is something of a rarity among this site.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Michael G. Smith]

Lol, I hoping for some insight on your write.

[zainul]

Wonderful acrostic of MAGIC.
It shares a lovely meaning of the very word 'magic'.

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your time and lovely review. I highly appreciate it.

[zainul]

You are always welcome,dear friend.

[Praveeta]

Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Truly a splendid write my dear Praveeta :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much lovely friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Lots going on in very short amount of time...
I like the word usage:

visions
thoughts
senses
spirit

and the ending...

Chills me!

you put just as much action on the other-side with the word usage:

Momentary
Ascending
Gripping
Invoking

Chills me!

Like an incantation...of sort if you say the word fast and recite it out loud...

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your time and feedback.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[m.s.early]

This sounds like the poem's conception. Remarkably easy to comprehend yet still leaving this reader reeling :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and comment.

[Shaquana Adams]

Very vivid and lovely. Thanks for sharing :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks Shaquana.

[Moon]

There are some very powerful feelings in this piece. These can be felt during the making of some form of art, the captivation of Nature, or during a religious practice. All of these have some sort of magical feeling in them. Well done !

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your insightful review.

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Ahena MK]

your poem was truly magical.. loved the description of the feelings felt ..
wonderful great job!!

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much Ahena. I am glad you loved it.

[Linda alexander]

Can this be depicted as the state of any artists before creating their masterpiece poem, painting, writing, sculpture, certain stages or time of some one when they produce most fabulous contribution to philosophy, poetry, or whatever art form, that is true magic, as they can not reproduce it another time, it definitely makes some to have chills, clever and keen write, enjoyed

[Praveeta]

I like your interpretation. Remarkable indeed. Thank you.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, like the word remarkable too

[Sami Khalil]

Invoking spirits can be found in voodooism or merely some Eastern religions with mystical forces... When it gives you the chills you know that ain't good. Invoking names and spirits is a powerful thing. A very good poem...:).................

[Praveeta]

Yes, and it is widely practised. Thanks for your time and feedback. I appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......................

[Stella Armour]

a lot of emotion in just a few line , but a few lines perfectly placed...

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and lovely feedback.

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure....