Chants

Chants

A Book by Crimson
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A Fantasy/Adventure book about a 17 year old girl who wakes up to find everyone she loves is missing and the whole world, at least until she meets a mysterious figure in the shadows.....

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© 2017 Crimson



Author's Note

Crimson
Try and ignore grammatical mistakes or spelling errors and focus on the main story :)

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I really like your story, and the plot is super interesting. I'd definitely like to read on from where you've got to so far. My only critique is that, in my opinion, you're taking the story a little bit too fast. I think that I'd like to see a little bit more description - say about the actions throughout dialogue, the surroundings, etc. And that Cami finding this new world and it developing is happening a little bit too quickly. But I think that all depends on what sort of a writer you are, and you may be one of those people who like to keep the reader extremely hooked by chucking everything at them, so keep dong what you're doing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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I really like your story, and the plot is super interesting. I'd definitely like to read on from where you've got to so far. My only critique is that, in my opinion, you're taking the story a little bit too fast. I think that I'd like to see a little bit more description - say about the actions throughout dialogue, the surroundings, etc. And that Cami finding this new world and it developing is happening a little bit too quickly. But I think that all depends on what sort of a writer you are, and you may be one of those people who like to keep the reader extremely hooked by chucking everything at them, so keep dong what you're doing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this story! It's a great story and leaves you wanting to read more and more. Furthermore, the setting descriptions evoke a vivid image of the protagonist's surroundings. Try to focus on describing other aspects of the story eg. the speech

Posted 1 Year Ago


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