Winter reflection

one line poem for a contest

When the moon neighbors the sun at high noon, a pen glides upon her icy reflection.

Reviews

[Archia]

That creates a very beautiful image, even though I'm not sure what image exactly it's meant to create. But the image that comes is beautiful nonetheless. I loved the use of the word 'neighbours' just that one word, there's something about it. Wonderful.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thank you very much. I was always impressed by the daylight moon, especially in winter, I wrote this in order to recreate the atmosphere of days with snow and ice, when both sun and moon and swans are reflecting in an icy lake for example. Eventually the snow melts.