The Same

What would happen if rascism was gone?

We are all the same,

So why are we tainted with shame,

We are all judged by our looks,

Categorized by our color,

Steriotypes give us trouble,

Insults cause great pain,

Only few can realize,

We are simply all the same,

If there were no colors,

Would this problem just end?

Would it continue?

We have been cursed with hatred,

Been greedy for power,

Tought to rise against all others,

So for future generations,

I have one question,

Just this once?

If we got rid of rascism,

Would we continue,

To cause others to fall.

 

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes I agree. I also hate discrimination...racism...favoritism - all things about inequality. We are just the same in God's eyes. Nobody is perfect, nobody as good as he thinks about himself. We are all born with our own weaknesses.
Thanks. It's a great work.

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you very much for not only liking the poem but for expressing how you feel about it as well

[Blue Belle]

Love it!

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you!

[Ry]

This is great =) A little comma happy, but hey, this is poetry. There are no rules. Lol I think everyone asks the same questions at least once in life. People can be so backwards with their judgments and others don't realize that there is no need for shame or insecurity or hatred. Great poem =) Thanks for the review, by the way.

-Anna

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you and your welcome