Unabbreviated

Unabbreviated

A Poem by Sherline Heriveaux Poetry
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When will summer stay?

When will winter never go away?

When will fall linger?

When will spring fever last forever?

When I am complete.

When I will never want,

When I will never need.

Summer will stay,

Winter will never go away.

Fall will linger.

Spring fever will last forever.

 


© 2015 Sherline Heriveaux Poetry



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Hmmmmmm....every season all the time huh? You know, you can't have your cake and eat it too. tell memore about what being complete means to you. ( : O )

Posted 1 Year Ago


There's much more than humour in this deeply philosophical piece, (at least to me!)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I liked this simple beautiful peice. The repetition gives it a childlike feel that belies the mature message it conveys. I enjoyed this juxtaposition and thought it really made the poem. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sherline Heriveaux Poetry

1 Year Ago

You revealed a perspective about the piece that I didn't even have. Thank you.
Excellent poem, short, sweet and beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sherline Heriveaux Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Craig.

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Added on October 19, 2015
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