This Ever Amazing Land

This Ever Amazing Land

A Poem by Shiningwolf

Trees swaying and rivers flow

A mind can rest

As this land glows

 

A sight that stretches

Seems like an eternity

Watching the flowers blow

This is where we yearn to be

 

Clouds fly by

As we stand still

As you think Oh my

This is real

 

We are here

We are alive

These things are so dear

As we watch this land thrive

 

We live on this earth

But too busy with our lives

To only see what this planet is worth

We want peace, this is what we strive.

 

Lay down on the grass

And watch the sky

Just let time pass

And say goodbye.

 

For time has come

To feel at peace

You and earth have become one

Now your problems can release.

 

© 2011 Shiningwolf


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I think that if everyone went out into nature and experienced this connection, there would be no more wars and people would protect the earth. Very peaceful writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


we sometimes forget what the earth does for us... i always take that time to appreciate nature and mother nature. Take time to watch a sunset, fall asleep in thick grass, and feel the sun beating down on your face.. this all makes me smile. Thank you for sharing this poem.. well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was very peaceful, and it was very clearing. It felt like this was kind of a drain for you. Like you were holding your feelings bottled up, and then you just dumped it out. This was great, I loved it! 90/100

~ Iris ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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"We want peace, this is what we strive."
This is so true...
very peaceful and delightful poem to read,
I really enjoyed this, we all need to read such positive writings from time to time, thank you for sharing :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


Full of positivity
And connection with the Earth
Feeling it's gravity
Pulling us back into grounded reality

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2011
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Shiningwolf
Shiningwolf

Mustang, OK



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My name is Crystal. I am 23 years old. I am who I am. I am just a girl trying to traverse through the challenges of this life. I write to express myself and to create art that has meaning. more..

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