Computer!

Oh this screen

Why does it have to be so mean?

I gave you a command!

Why aren't you as cool as a rock band?

 

I tell you to do something

But all you do is freeze

While I am stuck on this page
You want to shut off?, Please!

 

I remember when I first got you

You were so fast

But now when I command something

You don't do it, even if I ask.

 

Will you move to the next page!

I can't grasp why you are doing this

You just sit there

And I am so pissed!

 

It's time to shut you off

All you want to do is die

Well this is it

This is my last good-bye.

 

Good-bye computer

Have a nice trip

Maybe you can be used as scrap parts

While my new one is already being shipped!

Reviews

[Rose Masen]

Lol! This was hysterical! I have a feeling though, and it could just be me, but this piece held a hidden meaning, like when life gets rough, it's a shame we can't have a new one shipped out.

I loved it though. :)

[Shiningwolf]

yeah kind of made my own thing with blissed ill change it :)

[Cricket Kidd]

Ha-ha! I love it! Computers are exactly like this, every time! Although, I don't know if 'blissed' is a real word.

[Libby]

Awesome.

[BlackMoonRising]

Ha ha! Great!

[howlfjdks]

Then we start thinking like a computer, then where does that leave us? Cute poem, fun first verse, I smiled throughout.

[Shiningwolf]

lol

[Gone]

I see you have experiences one of WritersCafe's less loved features!

[pheasant]

Again, well crafted and a very relevant subject... unless you have an Apple, even an older used one performs much more reliably, and without a hitch usually.

[lovejulez03]

I loved it! It's a cute poem and made me chuckle. Quite creative!