I Just Don't Understand

I Just Don't Understand

A Poem by CrystalMoon
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This poem is about a girl talking to guy who she doesn't know what her feelings are.

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I dont understand
I thought I liked someone else
But I want to hold YOUR hand
I thought this other guy was caring
And that your just a fake
I thought he was amazing
But now im awake
I found out that he misunderstood me
And maybe you cared
That HE wasnt for me
I think you need to be fair
Why is it that I liked him
But I was writing YOUR name
Over and over again
It felt just the same
Like rain falling from the clear blue sky
YOUR the one that makes me want to fly
Your in my heart forever and always
Now whats left for you
Is to find the right way

© 2010 CrystalMoon



Author's Note

CrystalMoon
no mean comments
please and thank you :)

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Nice! I can really relate to this poem. And I just absolutely love the theme. Love is hard and it's beautiful once you get through the hard heartbreak obstacles. And I just love this poem! Good job! Keep up the good writings! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's a good poem besides the grammar errors and spelling errors.

I like it a lot. Just fix some issues and this could be a great poem. Feel free to contact me if you'd like any help.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"But I was wrighting YOUR name"... Um.. 'wrighting' is spelled writing. >.<

Good poem though! I really like it.


Posted 8 Years Ago


(I've felt that way before.) I loved this poem! It made me feel sad. ;p

Posted 8 Years Ago



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