Fame that I'll never get

I feel a breeze 

That frees 

My soul

From the role

It has to play

To get to broadway

But I know it will never happen

Like there was never a dragon

I cry and scream

Till I can't dream

I only get nightmares

Which never compares

To the betray

To get to broadway

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, pls review I would love to know what u think

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I reckon that you have a marked talent as a poet, this is great

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Thank u so much! ^.^ I'm really glad u liked it!

[Pax]

your young and opportunities comes showering so dream big my friend....the power of positivism will shine ....you just have to believed that you can....
great write!!!
a 100 for you and positive outcomes will come...

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Thanks, really I'm flattered and encouraged :)

[Cynthia Man]

Dreams can be true if we try good enough :) But I believe that thinking positive can help you go through the difficulties :) keep believing in yourself :D
Everyone do have a dream to fulfill and we shall all work hard!
Nice written!

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Thanks! You've really encouraged me! :D

[Cynthia Man]

ur welcome :)

[Ruby]

That is so cool I like it 100/100

[.]

Tnx I'm glad u like it! :)

[Ruby]

:)

[AK]

Wow! I love this poem! It has a nice tune and upbeat to it. Aeeosme wrote, keep writing!

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Tnx! :)

[AK]

You're welcome!

[Nicole]

i really like this :) sort of a "sell your soul to catch your heart" kind of thing. my favorite part is probably the first stanza, with the (highly appropriate) "Playing a role to get on broadway" metaphore. very nice :)

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Tnx =)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, I really like this but I hate the negativity! Never say that your dreams won't come true. There might be people that say you won't accomplish your goals/dreams in life but they're wrong. You have God to lean on and he's certain that you'll be successful in anything you do now or maybe down the road. Keep your head lifted high and don't get those scary nightmare filled with negative thoughts! Like my poem "Never Give Up", in the end I just do what I want to do even if people don't think I'm any good at it---WRITE! Great write, indeed Katerina. :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

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Tnx, I know I have to be more positive. Tnx again :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, and yes being positive will definitely make you feel better about yourself! :) You're welcome again. Haha

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=)

[White_lily]

good work :)

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Thank u! :)

[_]

AWW! I want to be on Broadway too! COME ON! Wee'll get there!

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Thanks, I'm very sure we all will, one day. :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Very nice. Keep writing!

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Thank u! :D

[Westminster Abbey]

No prob! Don't give up!