Stand In The Way

Stand In The Way

A Poem by Caroline
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This is about me finding a hard time to show my true self to someone who I really care about.

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I love you
I really do
But what stands in the way
The mountain that separates us
The wall that needs to be demolished

My truth
To your lies
That can make us or break us
I want to let you in
But I am closed up
My door is locked

We talk at the doorway
But I couldn't let you in
I need to find a way to
Open up
And move the mountain
That stands in the way

© 2017 Caroline



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this is the best place to express our feeling. and you did this.

I agree with Holly , we all are doing the same. But we have to show the courage to tell that to our loved ones.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sure a lot of us on here feel this way. That's why we're here writing to strangers instead of telling these things to our loved ones. Very relatable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Caroline
Caroline

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