My Flower

Sweet, simple bloom.

The purple petals unfurled in all their beauty. Small and delicate they seemed like they would crumble at the slightest touch. Like the purple flowers she was a beauty. But I too was worried that at any moment she would crumble and fade away like the flowers she loved so much. 

Reviews

[G. Writing]

This is amazing I admire your writing. The way you compared the flower petals to the girl was genius. I felt a connection to this poem.. Keep writing!

[Poetic Beauty]

This has great imagery and the comparison between the flower petals and the person are wonderful.

[Rose Hagerty]

Thank you, I'm glad that you got that I was trying to convey the delicate frail nature of the girl through her flowers.