Life

the things that enter my mind-i cannot even fathom

I'll swim 

in a pool 

of pain and misery. 

Drowning 

myself 

from the inevitability

 of sorrow.

Then lounge 

at the most disheartening 

place-- life

Author's Note

amateur writer/poet :)

Reviews

[dan]

A story relayed through not well-hidden darkness, a sense of foreboding looming, coming closer. This is an honest, straightly shot arrow of a write, destroying any doubt about the message. I like dark. A very well-crafted piece. Thanks to Maja for the rr. take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and true poem. Your words felt honest and true. Life will test us often. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Maja]

Honestly? Nice line cuts. It gave the impression that you really were swimming, drowning, and lounging in something since the lines after those were the extended ones. Like the words were dripping down to form the pool of words beneath.