What Can't Forget Cannot Regret

What sweetest dream did ever rise from hope?
A thought once shared that someone cared before.
Left lost in bitter slopes, the fight to cope
With lies untold, a heart turned cold and sore.
The ash that burned in silent hours beneath 

The wood, smothered the flames and brought the rain
By storm unseen, of untold strength and heat;

And in its midst, the cold,it numbed the pain.

Was not it long before that love prevailed?
So sure of life and love; now words have lied,

Deceptive as they came; the sweetest tale,

Now tragic in the midst of broken ties...

A fairy tale was not our future set,

Still love lives on, the pain i can't regret.

Reviews

[Angad Waraich]

You seam to have mastered paring passion with love.

Another beautiful piece.

Thank you.
-Angad

[Mazie]

thank you again for your wonderful feedback :) I'm glad you liked it ^^

[Sami Khalil]

The flames of the past are being smothered in the pain and under the rain. Excellent...:)......

[Mazie]

thank you ^_^

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[KAREN]

I really liked this. It is sad, but there is no regrets of what she has been through because she deeply loved him. Awesome write!

[Mazie]

I'm glad you really understood the meaning, and thank you for your feedback ^_^

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[Allie]

This reminds me of a past relationship that was passionate and painful at the same time. Good write!

[Mazie]

thank you, and I am sorry to ear about that :( I think it's something a lot of us can relate to...

[ANM]

Well put together a lovely poem Bravo!

[Mazie]

thank you ^.^

[ANM]

Your welcome!

[Wórdsmíth]

Excellent work! I loved the title either... you`ve expressed many verse of life, past and memories through this beautiful insightful poem. Well pen`d! ;)

[Mazie]

thank you very much my friend :) I am sorry that I am slow doing reviews, I have read some works of yours though and they look great :) I am in the midst of my final year of university and exams atm aha

[Mazie]

so please excuse me if I am a bit slow responding * :P

[Wórdsmíth]

Your presence`s enough to give a rhythmic tone to my notorious heart so, it`s all cool. You can review my stuffs whenever you are free. No rush, sweetheart. Keep hard studying. Let the stars know how bright you are in a way they could flash you some blush & flush in your face to glow.

[Botania]

This poem speaks of losing "a sweet tale" of love. Enjoyed this insight. Some sweet tales take a detour when hurt is experienced.

[Mazie]

Thank you :) and yes, it's very true!