Moon Dust

MOON DUST

High green grass a pleasant place to rest
This quiet spot I so often go

The only sound the beat in my chest
I lie under the moons soft glow
In a dream flying through dark space
On top a shooting star I race
Gather up moon dust in my pocket

To place in  my true love's locket

Some say the dust from the distant moon

When placed in a special one's charm
Cast the moon's spell and entwines the arm

Forever to make your love swoon
After time I get up from where I dwell

To realize I was under the moon's spell

Reviews

[Middling]

This quit spot I so often go

-that doesnt make sense.

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I am blown away, this was absolutely beautiful. This flows nicely and is very interesting. Great job, I really enjoyed it!

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