Fantasy

Fantasy

Dragon's breath burns
singed flamed sensuous
volcanic eruption
red sparking gold
breathe and breed fire.
Spike's Scale
phallic flower
petal's pleasure blooms
tease, whirl, dance
romance.

White lace swirls
tempting tornadoes
gyrating soot
painting alabaster echos
in woven fabric dripping dragon's blood.

Frozen desire personfies
iced shadow of innocence
resting against a blazing pillow
dipped in primal passion
fused eyes
spewing rainbow's hues
recognized ominous recipes
glittering
as forked tail flicks
consciousness stings
alarm clock rings
D A M N it was only a dream

Reviews

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[wordman]

lot of vivid words to invade your mind,,loved it

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Maybe is just me but I don't get nothing what you tried to say .

[747]

- consciousness stings / alarm clock rings - I do quite like those lines.

You have some rhyme, but mostly freestyle; a nice balance but the placing makes some sections a little flow disrupted. Lovely imagery though.

I quite enjoyed. Beautiful work.

[Deuces]

I'm saying D A M N it was only a poem!

This was hot. Love it and will be back for more.