I'm Hungry for the Pain

I'm Hungry for the Pain

A Poem by Cyntax

I'm not your normal adversary.
I needed you.
I need you.
I need the pain.
Try to be slick...
Against the slickest of all.
So you can feed my hunger for...
Numbness.
Numbness that fuels the strength.
Fuels the strength for dominance.
And disregard for love's pain.
So please. I beg of thee.
To try and punish me.
And if you first do not succeed.
Try, try again.
Strengthen me with your betrayal.
Female, friend or family.
I feed on deceit.
I lust for the Judas in you.

I'm hungry for the pain.

© 2016 Cyntax



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Brutally raw, lovely confronting, brilliantly spoken.... I enjoy the honesty in your stuff, for it's close, to what we all face in our daily life.... Your last line is just asking for a second piece, "it begs for continuing"

I enjoyed this...

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Elisa. I always appreciate your feedback.
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3 Years Ago

You're ever so welcome G. Hope all is well with you too! I'm still in holidays... back fully soon.



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Now this has depth and flow...
the verse puts the words right out there...
does not leave any doubt in play ---
you focus on the moment for the reader...
the repetitiveness in the same words added to this write...

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like the boldness of this piece, very much, a pleasure visiting your writing today hon x

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love this poem because I feel the same way sometimes. I actually wrote a poem with the same theme called 'Addicted to Lonely', beautiful write and expressed perfectly.

Posted 3 Years Ago


"i feed on deceit/ i lust for the Judas in you"

i wish i had written those lines...fantastic.

this piece seems to be a poet's mantra..."i thrive on pain"

it gives me fuel for my writing.

begging to be betrayed...i like that concept.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir. To be an inspiration to you in any way is humbling. Your reviews are always apprecia.. read more
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FEA
Pain comes in many forms, its so easy thinking we need some1 their to fix it all , the fix is really within, its kind of hard to see in the dark to the light , but when we come out that's when we know. Awesome poem:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Jonathan! Very much appreciated.
FEA

3 Years Ago

Your very welcome

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