'Til death

'Til death

A Poem by Cyntax

I crave you like nicotine.
You're that throat hit when the smoke hits my lungs.
You're the inhale.
The exhale.
The satisfaction.
The regret.

I'll curse you.
But need you.

'Til death do us part.

© 2016 Cyntax



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Definitely know that feeling. Bravo :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cyntax

1 Year Ago

Thank you, my friend. Much appreciated!
Ugh, I had a relationship like this once. I am so glad it's over. I don't know why some people just get under our skin like this but I can tell you, looking back know I can't believe stayed as long as I did. Good one G.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very powerful write.. I love the depth of passion..xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


You're that throat hit when the smoke hits my lungs.
---
You're what hits the throat when the smoke hits my lungs.

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or is that how you wanted it written>>>??? --- and these lines:

You're the inhale.
The exhale.
The satisfaction.
The regret.
---
You're the inhale,
Exhale,
Satisfaction,
And the regret.
---
the rest goes quite well...the meaning and intent is verbatim...to the reader...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Powerful piece. Hard to fight an addiction. You can't stop needed it even if it kills you.
Love is no different. Always a pleasure to read your word ; )

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ooh. I like this metaphor. You always use the ones no one would think of, and you do it quite beautifully :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is real craving. I like honest and directness of this poem. Sometime regret is forgotten with the satisfaction. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


All the things we crave should carry this disclaimer...there always seems to be a dark side to the things we covet the most...great work G :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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