An empty ocean

An empty ocean

A Poem by MoonChild

Alone with my thoughts, they come in waves of emotions
Emptiness has taken over me, I'm drowning in its ocean
What it would feel like to be loved
Oh so long I have waited for your touch
Is it my figure or my soul too black
Is it a personality that I lack?
What is it about me that's so unloveable
Since when did I become so disposable?
Swimming In this sea of loneliness no one can see my tears, no one knows my fears
For the girl who was never spoken to did not speak
She didn't whimper, nor did she sleep
I walk through this life with a heavy head on my shoulders
Too many questions gone unanswered
Filled with pain and sorrow
I dread getting up tomorrow
If I would be so lucky to sleep forever,
Would anyone notice my non existence endeavour?

© 2017 MoonChild


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Well penned. I hope it's not true in your case though. I like how you stick with the water/ocean theme throughout. It works.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Beautiful words filled with sadness, yearning, Loneliness.....

If I would be so lucky to sleep forever,
Would anyone notice my non existence endeavour?

Well no one will care.........

Posted 6 Years Ago


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AcasualPawn

6 Years Ago

Yeah but it has to many companions

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Added on August 22, 2017
Last Updated on August 28, 2017
Tags: Loneliness, lonely, poem, poetry, sad, alone, depression, depressed

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MoonChild
MoonChild

United Kingdom



About
I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

Writing
I tried I tried

A Poem by MoonChild