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Babe, you don’t even know.
You don’t know
That when I see you,
my eyes well up with tears like a dam about to burst.
You don’t know
that when I touch you,
I long to hold on like a tree roots to the ground.
Oh baby,
You don’t know
that when I hear you,
 my ears ring like wedding bells.
You don’t know
that when you leave,
 I die like an annual flower,
and when you come back I bloom again.
What you do know,
is I love you.
And what I know,
is you love me too.

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

awwwwwww jeeze! I love the repetition here; it works splendidly!!

the setup is great, as well. just a great overall piece. and it made me smile :)

my favorite line was:
"I long to hold on like a tree roots to the ground."

wonderful :)