Crowded Isolation

Crowded Isolation

A Poem by Sarah Jane

I am surrounded by noise
I am drowning in chatter
Faceless connections
and tunneled laughter
I am lacking of synapses
The binding chemistry
I just merely simulate
This mindless entity
I communicate in nods
and convincing smiles
I just live nonchalant
Waiting on something
Worthwhile

© 2016 Sarah Jane


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I often feel alone within crowds of people too, so I'm happy to say that you aren't the only one. I always feel so...out of place whenever in a crowd...like I'm supposed to be loud & chattering like everyone else when all I want is to run away and simply be in silence with myself. Im not one for constant noise or constantly being around people, it seems to drain me. I need my space & solitude from time to time. Great poem & it perfectly describes the emotions of social anxiety. I'm glad I can relate to this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Great capture of silently screaming in a crowd of people. I really like the intelligence you used to write this. It might need more it feels unfinished slightly.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sarah Jane
Sarah Jane

Tallmadge, OH



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