Sitting alone

Sitting alone

A Poem by Dakshta

Sitting alone in the dark
Waiting for your arms to embrace my heart
This pain is way too much for me to take
Only your love can break me free from my past…

© 2013 Dakshta


Author's Note

Dakshta
ah another sad one...dam you sad movies!

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Wow... Beautiful! It's amazing! The way you expressed the emotions in this are just mind blowing! I can't express it in words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


simply superb ..... heart touching .....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dakshta

10 Years Ago

thanks so much :)
Vivek K. Tiwari

10 Years Ago

:-) :-) ...............
simply superb .. heart touching ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love can do miracles :)
I completely agree with you ..
Sometimes i also sit alone and feel what i have done wrong during my day..
this pain is so hard to handle..
still with a positive mind we can easily bear it..
Thank you for sharing this piece with me :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dakshta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review Akshat :)
Aw this poem is so relatable:/ The word is absolutely perfect! Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dakshta

10 Years Ago

Thank Maggie! :)
❤ Maggie ❤

10 Years Ago

:)
Wow, love the possibility of ending the old life and embracing the new life with new love. The words are stunning. It is few but speaks volume. Thanks for sharing this piece my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dakshta

10 Years Ago

Thanks Marc! :)

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Dakshta
Dakshta

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Hello to anyone who is reading this! Hmmm well my name is Dakshta and I think you know that already ah anyway I'm 17. According to some people I talk a lot and they think that I don't act my age, but .. more..

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