Dad

Dad

A Poem by Dalebear


The days and weeks years go past

But it another memory of you  I grasp

Who can forget what you did to me

When I young and when I was three

I suffered I cried

Inside I died

You damaged and broke me down

The brain damage when you kicked me crown

But all that abuse you gave me and I’m still here this day

And I hope one day you pay

And someone see what a monster you really are

And I’m a survivor of terrible abuse but I come so far

 


© 2013 Dalebear



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Good job with this, it's very relateable. A lot of people go through abuse and harassment of various forms throughout their lives silently. Not many ever receive justice of any sorts. This poem was justice enough for my doubts on if the world has some form of humanity left. Go on and live a normal happy life, let the devil sink with the past and his future be dark and dull.

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CBH
I suddenly feel very lucky...Yeah, it did that to ME.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Good job with this, it's very relateable. A lot of people go through abuse and harassment of various forms throughout their lives silently. Not many ever receive justice of any sorts. This poem was justice enough for my doubts on if the world has some form of humanity left. Go on and live a normal happy life, let the devil sink with the past and his future be dark and dull.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Striked it HARD...!!! Screams when written are felt by the eternal..!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Em
This hit me hard. Very well written, and very sad. I had something terrible happen to me when I was little and poetry has really helped me through it. I really enjoyed this piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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thats...........verrrrrrrrrrry touching!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful! it tells a story. great use of words and it flows well too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write; passion was positively bleeding through your words. Poems about abuse, neglect, and things on that order really touch me, because a poem so beautiful comes from a heart so damaged. Great job on this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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