The Sad Little Boy

About my life

This sad boy goes and hides

 

The world yet again pushed him a side

 

Should I scream or cry which ever I can’t decide

 

I slowly cover up my scars

 

I feel so isolated trapped around with bars

 

More I cut the more I lie

 

I think I should come open or try

 

It me only me I take the blame

 

I have so much inner pain

 

My poor broken heart

 

Which has stopped leaves me falling apart

 

All I see is blood

 

Why am I so misunderstood?

 

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Dalebear,

I have been there, I have been the outcast off to the side, I embrace it. Why not? Why not be what people expect you to be. Madness....insanity...all of it....is a hell of a ride.

Regards,

Matthew

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. oh, you write so beautifully and your words are so true ... those who don't know our kind of pain are not able to understand what's happening inside ... how tough it is ... how much it hurts ... and then if we cut ... they think something's wrong ... i think you should write more poems and draw more ... that'll tell them ... and they won't be able to say anything ... you're so talented ... you can do it ... that's what i do ... i write so many poems that they finally start trying to understand ...

[paul]

hey !! great rhyming poem... and i love the sad subject matter

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

gives me a little rise on my cheeks, and sighs a little bit.

boy, you must've been really sad.

cute and babyish, the rhyming is splendid.

good job.

keep writing, ill be watching. take care.

[Cynthia]

It's so sad.
It's a great poem with a nice rhyeming.
It's about your llife... It must be so sad, I hope it will soon turn to a last for long history.
Thanks