Good night tears

Good night tears

A Poem by Dalia
"

Tears sometimes are healing to our souls

"

                              Every night before I go to sleep
                                And as no good night I hear
                      No friend..no lover..nor a caring brother


My tears soothes me..
hot..salty..running one after another..

Good night darling..we're here..
They say...tire me up to sleep..

Good night I say...caring tears..
How am I supposed to sleep without you peers..

© 2013 Dalia


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Such a warm drama :') I want to dry those tears for you... bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thats because this one has the awwwwwww factor :)
Dalia

11 Years Ago

hhhhhhhhh yeah it does I feel so when I read it lol
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

:)
Beautiful and sad :(
Dalia i am here too not just your tears my dear lovely friend :*
I LOVE YOU :*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

11 Years Ago

:p yeah I know am tragic sometimes
Love you more
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

:)
So touchingly solemn. I suppose you could say tears are our final defence mechanism, when all else fails.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

11 Years Ago

Exactly :)
thank you , glad you liked, I appreciate your kind reviews.
Lonesome Traveler

11 Years Ago

Your very welcome
this is nice :) very cool concept but true the pain sort of bleeds out with the tears well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

11 Years Ago

thanks Deron :)
This drips sadness. Really feel the emotion. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

11 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing rose :)
hmmm. interesting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dalia

11 Years Ago

you think so !
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Although this is quite sad, your tears are your reliable friends in your solitude. I like the this as its so different

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dalia

11 Years Ago

glad you did my friend :)
Very touching, you speak of tears almost as a silent balm for your pain and loneliness. Sweet read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dalia, that is so sad and beautiful at the same time. Innocence is what I feel in this poem. Sweetly poetic and charming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jack ^_^

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Added on January 30, 2013
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A Poem by Dalia