Get up

you got to get up and try

When it's unfair
There's got to be a flame
When there's a flame.. someone got to get hurt
But it doesn't mean to stop..
You got to get up.. and face
Your inner pain

When its dark...
There got to be tears
When there are some tears.. you've got to be alone
But to be alone doesn't mean to be insane
You've got to get up and hold your tears
Face alone..your inner fears

When you're lost..
You've got to ask why
When you ask why..you've got to get some blame
'why do we fall in love so easy, even when its not right?"
"why do I give my heart and get it shot back?'
But being lost doesn't mean you must stop
You got to get up... swallow your pride
and face it with a cold smile

When there is desire..
Your heart must be hurt
Either ways, good or bad
But even if hurt it doesn't mean you're gonna die
You got to get up and step on it
Till it dies

Author's Note

If you can relate this to something you heard, then yes I wrote while listening to pink's Get up and try, I hope its OK I used lots of the songs words :P what do you think ?

Reviews

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Its really amazing Dalia , and so motivational , you've got to get up !

[Dalia]

sure we have to, always
thanks my dear friend

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Floyd has a style that is hard to rendition. But the choice of the lyrics and incorporating your own was very much understandable and an enjoyable read all of its own. Well done!

[Dalia]

thank you so much for reading and reviewing
glad you like it

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Of course! ^^ You're welcome :)

[Jack...]

Very nice. I thought I reviewed this already?

[Dalia]

thank you, mmm maybe not!

[Jack...]

I was having some computer problems yesterday and maybe it did not take, well anyway, this is stunningly beautiful and desperately painful. To touch people with your words is a precious gift and you use it amazingly. You have a knack at capturing a feeling and putting it into words so that the reader actually feels it inside of themselves. One of my daily joys is reading your works.

[Dalia]

:D my works are one of your daily joys
am absolutely rejoicing inside to know that, it's your sensitive soul sir that feels others agonies that's all :)

[Jack...]

Perhaps, or perhaps it is your sensitive soul that I feel in your poetry

[Dalia]

^_^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

like a sine wave crossing the itself and every point it meets the horizontal centre....i find comfort in ur words...

[Dalia]

well, glad you do.
thank you for your kind review :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yep