Breaking Free (Poem)

Switch off

Alleviate distraction, Dark

I desire your embrace

Pacing the edge

In to the hurricane

Ravaging winds of disgrace

Past has passed

Those ravaging winds

Where do I lay my soul

Rest I will not

For I've too long

One thousand chains I pull

Weakening rust

Defenses exposed

Through miles and miles of torture

Dawning strength

I lift these hands

The earth, she screams in horror

Reviews

[luviva]

thats cool, intersting and motivational, the way you use yo words is just fascinating, i loved it

[Damien Davison]

Thank you.

[Geraldine]

That was inspirational and motivating as well. I so loved the thought behind it, that never let the bad things to pull you down, gather yourself, don't stay on the past and move on. ^^ Such a great poem written in such greatness.

[Damien Davison]

Yea, I tend to write a lot of poems or lyrics like that, though some have darker endings. Thank you for the review.

[Southern Cross]

Great style and such powerful emotion..I felt those chains and the strength as well

[Damien Davison]

Thank you.

[Aaron]

I loved the style.
Throughout it you continuously show the things that are dragging you back. Then you show how you push through the problems and do what you can to fight back.
Thanks for sharing.

[Damien Davison]

Thanks man, I appreciate it.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

dark but brilliant I liked it

"Rest I will not
For I've too long
One thousand chains I pull"

wow

[Damien Davison]

Much appreciated!

[Alejandra]

Wow! Very nice. I love your choice of diction. Its powerful. Its strong. Well-done. :)

[Damien Davison]

Why thank you.

[SmileBig :)]

This is wonderful :) a bit creepy, and great word choice :D well done!

[Damien Davison]

Thank you :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I really enjoyed this write...well composed and profound...good job.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you, I appreciate that.