Art of the Craft (Poem)

Just a writer's thoughts...

The energy flows from my mind

To the carefully crafted words that I rhyme

Picking and choosing

My mind a thesaurus

Winning and losing

Through verses and chorus

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

love this

[Damien Davison]

Great! Thanks for reviewing.

[liberty sheldon]

I love to write and this right here, made me love it even more. great job.

[Damien Davison]

I'm glad I could influence you! Feel free to send me some requests!

[Lonely Islander]

'winning and losing
through verses and chorus'
that was my favourite line...this was a short piece but i think these are the true feelings of a writer...good job:):):D.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much, indeed they were! I appreciate the reviews!

[mandy]

exactly, damien!!!

[Damien Davison]

Heheh, I figured I'd just write it out, had a lack of inspiration then thought about writing. Thanks for checking it out!

[A love for poetry]

Nice!

[Damien Davison]

Thanks!

[Tex]

Very nice write. I wish I could communicate as well as this in this short of a piece.

I just loved this, Nicely done.

[Damien Davison]

I appreciate the review, the way I do it is I kinda just, step back, and view things as a whole... Anyways, thank you!

[taboo.poet]

Simple poem, but definitely worth the read :) I lived the rhyme scheme and the flow

[Damien Davison]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing!

[Richard Man]

Serving suggestion....."My mind's a thesaurus":
Or "My mind: A thesaurus"
One brain is so more powerful in it's ability to choose, create, express emotion and to see the funny side of life and catch a ball at the same time than all the greatest of the artificial intelligences jammed into one cosmic space and wired up.... testing... one ...one two.

[Damien Davison]

Hmmm... I agree, it should have the ":" after 'mind', thank you very much for the constructive criticism! Take care!

[Damien Davison]

On second thought, although it should have it, I find it creates a pause that is just not supposed to be there! lol

[John Stussy]

Good little summary of the process of writing. So many words are mixed and matched in the mind until we find the right ones, and language opens up to our use. Great job with this poem, it was a fun little read.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you for checking out my work John, good luck with everything, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Sid]

Wow, this is short but it has a lot of impact, I love it...awesome write!!

[Damien Davison]

One of many I tried to make short and sweet,thanks for taking the time!