Wings

Wings

A Poem by Damien Ridge
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A story of self, a song for me.

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A star in the night with darkness surrounding
It's hard to pronounce right, it keeps coming out wrong
Believe the inner child when it speaks, seek
Breathe deep when you reach peace, leap
It's not a ledge, it's an airstrip
But you said in your head that you can't bare it
Who cares if you can't stand it, you cherish your fam's hand
Just stand clear of the landing
Stampede in to battle
Retreat, enemies leave and their battered
At least defeat each of your bad thoughts
That's not a big reach, take the ladder
Man up, no just be who you are now
With a reason to keep speaking, go talk now
Walk farther than fathers of fathers, daughters of mothers
Brothers of daughters and daughter's of brothers
Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last
It would never change, just patterns
Ever rearranging, how to put the things in place that matter
Just madness
How could this happen, act quick, magic
Cast it, establish any single way I can manage to grab it
I'm just barely able to grasp it
Unstable, unmanaged
Capable of only what I'm focused on
If hope is gone, I'm holding on the rope
Slowly going down the only route I know
Those that know me know I sold my soul for the sickness
It's sickening, I said I'm sinking
In a sea full of symphonies
Memories of melodies, so mellow and deep
Send me to a heaven so free, regret is no thing
I'm better if me is bettering me
In bed with the feeling of set in a dream
I'm set to release

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My wings unfold, they take me high
I'd keep you warm and cold at the same time
Fly
Wind on our face, scenery amazing
Breathtaking, but wait, seem to be escaping
Just save me from taking another pill
Or a way to remain sane, am I crazy?
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It's like I open up a door
Standing in the frame I look at what's before me
I'm sorry if I never look back at the past after the fact
Casting a shadow at that
There's an illumination that saved me
Sick of playing all the games
I bet you're sick of saying the same things
Kid complaining there for days
I'm containing all my anger and saving it for a way out
Of a state where I'm in danger and dangling by a thread count
Need strength now
Everything it takes now
Not escape, let's make every single face proud
In the way are mistakes, never break down
On another train, am I crazy or sane?
How do I spread these broken wings
I've reached the ceiling and the room is squeezing me
I need the freedom and I need the room to breathe
I can see the sea underneath the moon
This kingdom
Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last
It would never change, just patterns
Ever rearranging, how to put the things in place that matter
Just madness
How could this happen, act quick, magic
Cast it, establish any single way I can manage to grab it
I'm just barely able to grasp it
Unstable, unmanaged
Capable of only what I'm focused on
If hope is gone, I'm holding on the rope
Slowly going down the only route I know
Those that know me know I sold my soul for the sickness
It's sickening, I said I'm sinking
In a sea full of symphonies
Memories of melodies, so mellow and deep
Send me to a heaven so free, regret is no thing
I'm better if me is bettering me
In bed with the feeling of set in a dream
I'm set to release

© 2016 Damien Ridge


Author's Note

Damien Ridge
A song I made, the video is of me playing it live with my acoustic. Let me know what you think!

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This is absolutely breathtaking for me. When I first started reading the lyrics, I noticed each word was written with care and meaning, however when I came upon, "Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last," I was hooked. The meaning of this song is beautifully written. I also would like to point out I love how you play with your words and integrate sound devices. Beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, much love!



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really like the airstrip idea...not a ledge--trying to put things in place seems impossible these days since there is so much madness...we have to go a little mad ourselves in order to survive.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

That's right! Thank you for checking it out!
I strongly connected to this song as it is related to me I love listening your song again and again. Thanks for making this song I admire you

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad you listened to it. And thank you that's great ha!
Hard listening for me because it takes me time to get into this kind of performance, not merely yours, but similar.. but will work on it.

As to your lyrics however, they touch - really touch the mind and heart, travelling places, leading the way out of desperation and a maze of entrapment and lack of self because of what's going on around you OH - such a mess of emotions in this and from all sides and in every colour grey, dark, pitch.

My head's filled to the brim with your words' beat. almost mesmerising if I were to allow it. I'll listen again some time.. try not to focus on the actual wording. Will try, think I must. Don't I?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, and no worries at all! I'm glad you were able to take in the lyrics a.. read more
The flow, the flow man. Insane.
I just love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Awesome, glad you love it!
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Posted 6 Years Ago


Deep lyrical content. Great to see meaningful lyrics these days when I turn on the radio I'm filled with waves of dislike...

You used many words I declared as favs for myself in my mind...I should practise using those more...

I am glad you shared this song with us..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Well I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for checking it out!
LostBoy

6 Years Ago

Welcome. I enjoy good lyrics. No plain stuff but pensive.
I liked the lyrics, and with the audio and how you stressed certain things it gave me a linkin park feel.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Nice! Always a pleasure to be compared to successful artists! Thanks.
This is really amazing!
The words are very well placed and the music brings it all together.
Recently at college, we were discussing about music and literature and the beauty of sung poetry. This would be a good example.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Awesome, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for checking it out.
Great performance!
Lyrics are meaningful and intricate.
Not, at all, typical fare.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you for checking it out! Means a lot.
Not lip it's clip sorry typo but hey it works lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

All good ha, thanks again!

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Added on January 25, 2016
Last Updated on January 25, 2016
Tags: Wings, Damien, Ridge, Music, Guitar, Lyrics, Acoustic


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