You Belong With Me

You Belong With Me

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by Taylor Swift's "You Belong With Me"

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We've known each other for years
And I've never felt this way before...
About anybody.. except for you..
We understand each other,
We laugh at each others lame jokes
We make fun of each other for the stupidest things
We have a deeper connection...
You belong with me
I actually care about you
Unlike her
The fact that you're captain of the football team
Just proves a point..
That she only likes you for what you have
Instead of for who you are...
But not me, I loved you before you could throw a football
That's why you belong with me
I love you more and more each day,
Why can't you understand
that you belong with me?
Me, the one who actually loves you...
Can't you see that I'm the one who understands you
Been here all along so why can't you see?
You belong with me
Because I love you like a bee loves nectar
From the beautiful flower that you are

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Another poem with my favorite line from an artist's song. This time it's "You Belong With Me" By Taylor Swift. "Can't you see that I'm the one who understands you, been here all along so why can't you see? You belong with me".
This verse is from her song. I hope you guys enjoy! :)

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You did a great job capturing the essence of the song. So often one can discover deeper feelings for their friend who doesn't seem to notice while he is in the spotlight.

One little nit: in the third line did you mean to put

'accept' or 'except"?

Other than that you did very well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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awww! thank you so much for posting this!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm , here's the link to youtoubeee video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuNIsY6JdUw , I just don't know what to say . . . I am exhausted

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love that song and this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. That was so cute! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job on capturing the line from the song.
Although honestly, I didn't like the end so much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love Taylor Swift and I can easily relate to this poem.Thanks for an amazing poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOnderful job:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) Pretty. So enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prized and relative, a welcomed piece for all, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 27, 2011
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