The Rock

The Rock

A Poem by Tasha
"

always being there when you need me.

"
I am the one that you can depend on
When times are tough,
You can come to me with your problems
And I'll give you the best advice I can

I am the rock
I'll always be there for you
No matter the situation
I'll always be your best friend

The rock,
The one you can stand on when you feel 
Like you're about to fall
I am the rock that can give you 
Hope and encouragement
When no one else is around

I am your rock,
And together we'll stand
On this rock we built together

© 2011 Tasha



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You kept this poem universal; a for everyone poem. I like those. You could have been speaking of a lover, a friend, or a confidant (sp.) Not linked on to dictionary.com, right now. LOL! Anyone whom does not have, at least, one such individual in their lives, must be lost; even if, it is a child or a parent. We all need some support, now and again. An excellent write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A great poem, and you must be an incredible friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem speaks about how friendship should be and that people can depend on their best friends when they need them the most. Everyone can relate to this, for they must have at least one friend like this in their life. Very well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ta'Sha,

Well said - but even more... the intent of the content does you proud gurl.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem of hope. We need good friends to hold us up when we fall. Thank you for a poem of love and kindness. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful poem! Love the idea of someone being a rock! We all need someone to be strong for us sometime.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, elegant, well worded.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the rock - the one who takes all the pain and reveals a joyful face.
very nice poem!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is very beautiful! Brava!! It reminds me of a song by Fransisca Battestelli

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a nice poem
i love this write..
though it is hard.. .to always just be there,
good luck

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely sentiment. We all need a rock! The only part that had me wondering was the last stanza where the rock goes from being you to something that you built together? Maybe that is just me not getting it (that certainly happens quite a bit!), but the repetition and change in imagery detracted a bit from the strength of the piece as a whole - which was in general very good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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