this is such a sad, and beautiful poem. every human must be tested by the horrors of life, i'm so sorry that yours is this unbearable and atrocious. this is really a very heartbreaking poem, yet very well written and emotive.
you and your wife are wonderful writers, i've enjoyed reading both of your work.
i wish you, your son, and your family the best wishes!
BROKEN really paints with words, the strong & loving bond you and your son have ...
You're wearing your heart on your sleeve and that takes guts.. Emotions spill off the page ... Lovely... Hope for the best.. Thanks for sharing!
This is a beautiful, heartfelt, mind-blowing write. It exuded emotion and love, and in reading this I really felt like I was taken on the journey that you'd travelled. Having been through a similar experience with my best friend a couple years ago, I know just how emotionally draining it can be, and I can't even imagine how hard it must be for you to watch your son go through this.
Stay strong; your son would be so proud of you for this write. He's lucky to have such a loving father. :)
I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..