Longing

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What is this i feel deep in my chest?
This is something that won't let me rest!
I toss and turn,
Turn and toss!
I need to figure this out.
This need.
This want.
This hungering desire.
This passion of unfilled lust!
What is it.
What could it be.
Oh wait there it is.
The last sip of my thirtieth beer.

Author's Note

LOL no I'm not a drunk. Just wrote the first thing that came to mind since my wife is bugging me to write.
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Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I love the picture that goes with it. I love Family Guy. Thanks for sharing. :)

[dangerbooze]

Hahaha. My boyfriend's dad would love this. -saves to favorites-

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

LOL. very witty and Made me giggle love it lol. Nice work God bless

[JENY]

Wow…
Wonderful…
Witty…
Simple….humble..and… beautiful…

[Jennika has a short att..]

The author's note made me laugh, cuz I thought dang I didn't think he drank. :p Yeah, I know imma dork, but I review your poems so you need me :D Haha by the way, awesome poem!

[HorrorMaster]

Sound like a drunk poem. Very funny.

[Poetic Beauty]

This can be take two different ways. One as a light hearted poem joking around or as a more serious topic about alcoholism. Either way this poem tells a story and it is a great story from both perspectives. Nice write.

[Senseless whatever]

Good one. Had me guessing to the end. Why the thirteenth beer? Significance in the number? LOL

[Liz]

That was great! I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't humor. It was really nice and fresh. Very funny, nicely done! :)

[Jon]

This was funny, glad to hear you dont drink, neither do I. I really liked the part. What is this i feel deep in my chest?
This is something that wont let me rest.
I toss and turn,
turn and toss.
Good job, been there before well without the beers..lol Good right:D Hope the family is doing good, PEACE:D