Empty

We must learn to love ourselves... flaws and all.

How can we expect others to fill that aching hole in our hearts when our cries are empty. 

Foolishly looking upon others as our cries bounce against their harden hearts. 

How can we expect others to love us if we can't even love ourselves.

Reviews

[AquarianPoet]

Hi Daniela,

Firstly, I had to smile when I saw your name as I too am a Dann D. lol

The last line of your poem was surprising because it captured the secret to love. The fact that someone of your age points that out restores my faith in humanity. :-)
Keep up the great work....and live your passion Dani!

Dann :-0

[Daniela Diaz]

Haha well nice to meet you Dann :)
Thank you for your kind words they are definitely very appreciated!!

[Orange Juice]

Your writing is growing on me. Every time I read your work I can't help but to feel some sort of connection(to your work that is) I really understand you. I feel like you've had your fair share of bad relationships and I love that you are learning a lot about it. Thumbs up my friend!!

[Daniela Diaz]

Thank you very much! :) i'm glad my writing is growing on you :)