The translucent bubble

The translucent bubble

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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Contraction of oneself

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A struggle in a bubble,
A contraction of oneself,
Hopelessly devoted,
To the confines of a shelf.

Longing for a answer,
To a question already known,
All the pieces are in play,
Balanced but not alone.

Fields full of flowers,
Opening to greet the sun,
Are we that different,
A child of light from just one.

Fighting what will be,
Fighting what we are,
I'm climbing off the shelf right now,
To become that shining star.

"Pop" goes the bubble.........

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


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I like this unique write on bubbles. Pen on...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......................

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Added on February 17, 2014
Last Updated on February 17, 2014
Tags: Bubble, Life, Spiritual, Game, Light

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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