View of Self

View of Self

A Poem by Dannyisawriter

God:

When he looks in the mirror

He sees a lot of things

I wish he could see himself clearer

But he always compares himself to the kings

 

Me:

When I look at my reflection

All I see are the scars

And the imperfection

Nothing but a bunch of flaws that need to be hidden behind bars

 

God:

I want him to see that’s he my son

A child whom I dearly love

But he constantly feels the need to run

And try to hide from me thereof

 

Me:

I see what I’ve done

I see all the filth within

No one could stand to have me for a son

Not someone full of my sins

 

God:

If only he could see that I have forgiven

Then he’d be able to forgive himself

And he’d accept all the gifts I have given

If only he would open his eyes to his self that resides in me 


© 2014 Dannyisawriter



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Beautiful! Love the conversation layout, and the wonderful message. Enjoyed your acbd rhyming. I wrote one and asked, in my reviewer notes, if anyone can tell me the name of that verse format. I liked the simple, easy to digest message of love that you revealed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


sounds like a good conversation who won

Posted 3 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

3 Years Ago

Tbh I don't know who won haha! I really was just focused on trying to show how we view ourselves can.. read more

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Added on July 17, 2014
Last Updated on July 17, 2014
Tags: God, Forgiveness, Views, Self

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Any way to use my imagination is my favorite pass time, and writing is my favorite way to express myself. I am unashamed to claim to be a Christian. And I hope that my writing will somehow be a positi.. more..

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