Cinderella

I wrote this from my heart.... This is how I want to feel when I meet my special guy.....

I feel like Cinderella,

Dressing up to look all bright,

Dancing with you all night,

Running away with all my might...

Only I don't leave at midnight.

I leave at 9:00, 

Sometimes even later.

But then those are the lucky days.

You make my heart dance,

When we talk.

You make my stomach prance,

When we play a duo.

 

You make me run away,

Cause I'm afraid I won't be with you.

You make me run back,

Cause I'm afraid to be without you.

I want to stay with you,

Even after I run away at 9:30.

I want to kiss you,

but I have to wait for the aisle.

So please hold on to me tight,

Cause I might run again....

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy this..... I want you to feel like Cinderella

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

I enjoyed how you made Cinderella relatable for girls today, by pointing out the difference in time, the anticipation of marriage, and the anguish at making the right life's choices. I think if you worked a little bit on your poetic flow by continuing to read and write poetry you will entrance your audience to fall head over heels for your story. God bless and keep writing!

[justdandy]

Thx so much

[pams poems]

i like thisd poem it express your feelings in a very unqiue way

[Kat]

Very well written, I really enjoyed reading this. It made me think of my own experience and I loved that.

[CallisttoMG]

Beautifully written. I especially enjoy your last line.

[justdandy]

thank you.... I basically wrote how i feel right now....