So Far Away

So Far Away

A Poem by Darian Justine
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In one of those write cheesy crap moods XD Yay! Here ya go.

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Your smile comes across the computer screen

sending butterflies through my stomach

making a smile cross my own face

and sending shivers up my spine

 

You laugh and its a wonderful sound

a beautiful mix of Heaven and Earth

there's a sparkle in those lovely eyes

that just works wonders on my heart

 

You speak, your voice a melody

repeating like a song on my stereo

I can't help but get to wishing

Wishing that you were by my side

 

There's many miles between us

there's a lot of road we have to travel

but without a shadow of doubt, I know

I know it's worth a shot

 

Because when I see your smile

hear the lovely sound of your laugh

mixed with the melody of your voice

you don't feel so far away


© 2013 Darian Justine



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This is simply one of the sweetest and very honestly written poem. This one sure will connect with millions of people around the globe..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Trust me my friend, I know this feeling exactly. You have written my heart in this wonderful poem. Beautifully penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and bittersweet poem...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how although you're forlorn about this person being so far away, by the end of it I see you're hopeful for them NOT being all that far afterall I really thought this was lovely and optimistic among all the dour and dramatic poems I read on here ... although this wasn't really upbeat or anything and maybe had a deep tone I get tired of reading the drama hah so thank you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Awhhhhh ;p this is lovely. 11/10!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Darian Justine
Darian Justine

Riverton, IA



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Well Hello. Welcome to my profile! :) Here's some things you should know about me. 1. A lot of my poetry is love or sadness based. I'm not sure why, it just happens I guess. 2. I am a very happy, .. more..

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