An English Breakfast On Mercury

An English Breakfast On Mercury

A Poem by David Darabian

In my dreams I’m an architect building you a gilded tower.

In my dreams we are two birds flying and kissing between the clouds.

Forget about reality, and come and fly with me to the lands we’ll never see.

In my dreams we float in space, past Jupiter, Mercury and different stars.

We have breakfast at the moon and spend the evening on Mars.

Your eyes are my Universe and with you I know I am where I belong

Your voice is the song I have yearned for so long.

 

Fly, fly, fly on the tunes playing in my mind

Spread your arms and let the wind take hold

And sweep you away where it never gets cold

 

In my dreams we are two doves snuggling on a lamp post

In my dreams we are two rabbits playing in the snow

Forget about reality, and dance with me wherever you want to be.

In my dreams we are king and queen, of a kingdom never seen.

A beautiful place with rainbows and lakes with a heavenly gleam.

A kingdom with flowers growing for you and I,

With bees buzzing around warm apple pie.

 

A day with you is my dream of reality, how it’s supposed to be.

An English breakfast on Mercury.


© 2010 David Darabian



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David Darabian
Love you, baby

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Looks like I was right to be optimistic. This is beautiful, imaginative, and vivid. Lines that rhyme are nice, but lines that rhyme within themselves are even better. Exhibit A: "Your voice is the song I have yearned for so long." I love that. Also, there's nothing at all wrong with that line, but I would add "song I have yearned to hear for" which I think works better with the flow. Very nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I just love this romantic piece, combining planets with a normal activity.....and the love and tenderness shown.........rhymed very well, although I don't see a need to rhyme poems.......but that is me!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Looks like I was right to be optimistic. This is beautiful, imaginative, and vivid. Lines that rhyme are nice, but lines that rhyme within themselves are even better. Exhibit A: "Your voice is the song I have yearned for so long." I love that. Also, there's nothing at all wrong with that line, but I would add "song I have yearned to hear for" which I think works better with the flow. Very nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great piece David! I could hang on these sentiments for the rest of the day. You showcase the very whimsy that is feeling love for someone in a most touching way. Bravo!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Nice work Good Sir.
Wouldn't it be nice if this was reality.
"Your eyes are my Universe..."
I might just use that line on the next single lady I meet. heheh
Great Job David. By the way thanks for the review. Trying to go outside my normal range.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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