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drowning in my thoughts

drowning in my thoughts

A Poem by Queen FireFly
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Depression eating away at my mind

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that's it,

im nearly gone,

i'll never fit,

I guess it's never done,


the voice breaks my walls,

they say stupid s***,

they dig in their claws,

im dumb i'll admit,


they stare,

they snicker,

do they care,

if I die quicker?,


the rumors spread,

they voices scream.

I wish I was dead,

my mind splitting at the seems,




© 2017 Queen FireFly



Author's Note

Queen FireFly
sorry if you feel the same

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This is so heartbreaking. I remember when there was a time when I didnt want to live either, it took me years to scratch , claw and dig my way out of that f*cking mess . Your poem is beautiful and tragic and i hope that writing helps exorcise those thoughts.

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

I try to.. some times it works sometimes not so much you know?
Artist in Hiding

4 Months Ago

yes i do unfortunately. just keep working towards life, i promise it's worth it, even if right now i.. read more
Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

thank you and I will



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This is so heartbreaking. I remember when there was a time when I didnt want to live either, it took me years to scratch , claw and dig my way out of that f*cking mess . Your poem is beautiful and tragic and i hope that writing helps exorcise those thoughts.

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

I try to.. some times it works sometimes not so much you know?
Artist in Hiding

4 Months Ago

yes i do unfortunately. just keep working towards life, i promise it's worth it, even if right now i.. read more
Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

thank you and I will
Your poems paint pictures. I'll keep saying it until it's not true anymore.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As someone who'd recently dug out of a pit of depression, I feel your poem to be a voice. Pat on the back for you!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

thank you so much
This is a very interesting take on what it means to feel these kinds of emotions. A lot of poems that I have read try to mention the struggles real quick then jump away to something empowering. But this does a good job of showcasing that feelings like these doesn't go away as easily as we would like them to. The word flow and stanza breaks work really well here. I really felt the power and emotion behind each piece of this poem. Very well done.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

thank you
Actually, I don't, but if I did, I'd seek therapy and medication.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

im in constant therapy and I take medication.
thanks for the review but that sounds harsh fro.. read more
John the Baptist

4 Months Ago

Did not mean for it to sound that way. I worked in mental health for many years, and therapy and me.. read more
Queen FireFly

4 Months Ago

oh im sorry for taking it badly now thank you for giving me a review anyway

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Queen FireFly
Queen FireFly

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. my name is something to find out and my age is now 16. i hate fake friends but i love true friends more..

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