wow

f**k life

cant breath

cant think

and yet

I still sink

every inch of me

is in pain

every inch of you

all in vain

I just want to go

and you cant accept

the fact that

i'm over you

Author's Note

I don't know just dabbling with words

Reviews

[emipoemi]

"can't *breathe"

so poignant....so powerful.....what a way to say "Back off!" the last line having no rhyme gives the whole sentiment that extra punch Well done!

[Ana B.]

I'd say it's a lovely dabbling with words :) there is a lot to read between the lines, well done :)

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you very much for your kind review

[Ana B.]

you're welcome :)