her

her

A Poem by soldier onwards

her...

I don't know how to explain

flowing from the earth

is the feelings I obtain

is it true this fate

I don't know...  to not know something  I hate


every second I'm confused

so in love with the feeling

when I'm hurt, I'm most amused

yet the way we connect sends me reeling

her eyes tell the story of another

... tell a story of one's old lover


her...


© 2017 soldier onwards



Author's Note

soldier onwards
I don't even know I was down and started to type

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great, I love it perfectly amazing

Posted 7 Months Ago


This is so melancholically gorgeous-- it flows as I read it in my head and I love the placement of the ellipsis. It's quite thought provoking and is a piece of writing that can be read over and over again. I love it!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is vibrating rythmically.
Filling every void simultaneously evacuating them.

Posted 9 Months Ago


madre mía....you have a way with words! Well done!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice flow of words one can relate too. Good work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

9 Months Ago

thank you for you review

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Added on October 9, 2017
Last Updated on October 11, 2017

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soldier onwards
soldier onwards

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..

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