A Poem by DarkArtz 2811


I don't know how to explain

flowing from the earth

is the feelings I obtain

is it true this fate

I don't know...  to not know something  I hate

every second I'm confused

so in love with the feeling

when I'm hurt, I'm most amused

yet the way we connect sends me reeling

her eyes tell the story of another

... tell a story of one's old lover


© 2017 DarkArtz 2811

Author's Note

DarkArtz 2811
I don't even know I was down and started to type

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great, I love it perfectly amazing

Posted 10 Months Ago

This is so melancholically gorgeous-- it flows as I read it in my head and I love the placement of the ellipsis. It's quite thought provoking and is a piece of writing that can be read over and over again. I love it!

Posted 11 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is vibrating rythmically.
Filling every void simultaneously evacuating them.

Posted 1 Year Ago

madre mía....you have a way with words! Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice flow of words one can relate too. Good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 2811

1 Year Ago

thank you for you review

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5 Reviews
Added on October 9, 2017
Last Updated on October 11, 2017


DarkArtz 2811
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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..


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