her

her...

I don't know how to explain

flowing from the earth

is the feelings I obtain

is it true this fate

I don't know...  to not know something  I hate

every second I'm confused

so in love with the feeling

when I'm hurt, I'm most amused

yet the way we connect sends me reeling

her eyes tell the story of another

... tell a story of one's old lover

her...

Author's Note

I don't even know I was down and started to type

Reviews

[Skyler Quinn Wolf Laws]

great, I love it perfectly amazing

[sparkly.ghost]

This is so melancholically gorgeous-- it flows as I read it in my head and I love the placement of the ellipsis. It's quite thought provoking and is a piece of writing that can be read over and over again. I love it!

[not your muse]

Your poem is vibrating rythmically.
Filling every void simultaneously evacuating them.

[emipoemi]

madre mía....you have a way with words! Well done!

[lawrence bear]

A nice flow of words one can relate too. Good work.

[DarkArtz 0703]

thank you for you review