i did it again

I'm sorry I said what I said

but I'm not the one

who wants me dead

just for a kick simple "fun"

surprise, surprise

glass like eyes

little chatter rings

wordless story told

every bird sings

young and old

surprise, surprise

glass like eyes

Author's Note

feeling strange

Reviews

[emipoemi]

I like the imagery. I like the flow. I may need to come back to this in order to verify whether or not I understand it. The refrain is poetic, but I can't seem to grasp how it fits into the poem. Are we painting a metaphor for blindness or very cryptically scolding in a "Kettle calling Pot" kind of way. Nicely written and worded at any rate. Well done!