tear drops

tear drops

A Poem by soldier onwards
"

missing my baby

"

Dry tears stain my cheek

like ink on my skin

the feelings I speak

strong yet paper thin

I miss him so

the feelings never slow



© 2017 soldier onwards



Author's Note

soldier onwards
writing out what I cant say

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the more times I read the deeper I fall into the content of this writing...... beautiful expression and I understand in my own way and also in how I absorb my own emotion from your words.
love it.
my first ever review on here and I hate having to grade personal expression.....I feel my words should give their own internal grading in the mind of the author as they are read.


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you very much



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Can feel the lump in the throat holding tear back- such a horrid feeling- I feel the longing, just terrible when ur other half is far from u- wonderful emotions expressed🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!! Short but it says a lot. Its a strong poem.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you very much
the more times I read the deeper I fall into the content of this writing...... beautiful expression and I understand in my own way and also in how I absorb my own emotion from your words.
love it.
my first ever review on here and I hate having to grade personal expression.....I feel my words should give their own internal grading in the mind of the author as they are read.


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you very much
Aww, i really love this babe

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

and I love you lol
King Spark

8 Months Ago

I love you too

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Added on November 10, 2017
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soldier onwards

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..

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