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A Poem by soldier onwards
"

from the heart ... a.j I love you

"

I've found my song

a simple little tune

He makes me feel like I belong

and I know we'll be together soon

until now I didn't truly understand

why I craved he so badly even just the touch of his hand


I'm in-love with him

he's always stuck in my head

I always win

remembering the words he said

his smile drives me crazy

he's so mean but he treats me like a lady


my meanie

my king

my love

my world


© 2017 soldier onwards



Author's Note

soldier onwards
my baby this is for you

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A very sweet write,
nicely written

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Jay
awwwwwwwwwwww its so cute I wanna die
not in a bad way though

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

8 Months Ago

thank you so very much
Reminds me of something violently stabbed into the ground, something sharp and spear like... the last stanza was very poignant, "your world". No offense but, you kinda sound like a dick. Loved the poem though.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

9 Months Ago

none taken and thank you
Whoever inspired you to write this will never find another like you.you are once in a lifetime.truly madly deeply

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

9 Months Ago

yes he truly has inspired me
Awwww gosh, i love this baby, together we're a perfect melody, our hearts beat as one as they sing the same song, hehe you've really melted my heart with this

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

King Spark

9 Months Ago

I really miss you so much babe
soldier onwards

9 Months Ago

I really miss you too
King Spark

9 Months Ago

I know baby, this distance is hard, but one day we wont have this distance hehe
Cute and cuddly. The ever romantic expression in poetic beauty. A lucky fellow to say the least.

Always and with Love

Jayden D.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

soldier onwards

9 Months Ago

king Spark is the lucky fellow and thank you for your kind review
K.
Matthew Kult

9 Months Ago

You are most welcome

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Added on November 13, 2017
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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..

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