building block from my heart

hurt, pain

the building blocks in my heart

are only scattered pieces that remain

every time I rebuild it falls apart

the wall of tears kept contained

fall crashing through out the thunder

I can't help wanting to be six feet under

I guess distance took too long

and arms length too short

i'm why we didn't stay strong

broken hearted lover of sort

I cant get over you

I guess my love wasn't enough to

keep you here

you needed closer distance

but now im falling apart

broken toy for instance

I use to smile.......

but it had to fad... its been a while

I cant keep my heart from spilling over

onto these worn out pages

im so sorry.... I wasn't closer

I hadn't felt so good in ages

I love that you loved my smile

I promise we'll meet again...... in a little while

Author's Note

mind the grammar and everything else that's wrong with this piece

Reviews

[Nathan Spark]

i love expression more than perfection. Let it loose.

[emipoemi]

Ok! The musicality is a little wonky in a couple of places, the first stanza is a little confusing in its message, and "I USED to smile", but the ending is freaking killer! Holy kwap! I just felt my heart thud when I came to that line. Way - To - Go! Simply fix the kinks and konks, and this would be an honest to God gem! Well freaking done!

(I must say also that this sounds like the antithesis to my poem "Distant Love". Have a read of that, when you can, and you'll see what I mean....It can be found back a way's in my writing (as it was one of the first group of poems I posted on here).....or would you rather I RR you it?)

[sette]

I am going through the process as well but it will be healed in time, stay strong