Lost Hope

Lost Hope

A Poem by Dark Angel's Storm

A poem about depression

Somewhere deep in an inner realm
Cast into the endless night
The child lies hidden overwhelmed
Alone and helpless in her plight

Occasionally she wakes to say
As she reaches for the light
I hunger for the light of day
It lies so nearly out of sight

So weakly does she start to crawl
But first shading her dreams like a cloud
The curtain of darkness does fall
Like a tattered, unholy shroud

© 2010 Dark Angel's Storm

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The flow is great as well as the imagery, nothing to really critique is was a great write. Can't wait to read more of your writing. Keep it up!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Well written. I like the phrasing, makes me see images in my head. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I Like The Rhyme And Flow Of This Poem. It Goes Together Very Well. Love The Poem, Keep On Writing(:

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2010
Last Updated on March 30, 2010
Tags: inner child, helplessness, loneliness, darkness

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