The Kiss

The Kiss

A Poem by Dark Beauty

Darkened dreams haunting me to awake,
battles are fierce pulling the web of dark life.
No light to flicker as quiet thoughts unravel me,
deceit plays, a heart of time.
Images move swift and shadows dance in my name.
I am awakened, the kiss of breath be mine.

© 2011 Dark Beauty


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as quiet thoughts unravel me ~ I love the complicated simplicity of these words, for all can read and find a different perspective in it's meaning, I myself know that my insomnia only worsens my dark days as when i should be resting I am too busy re running the day and worrying about it. You penned a beautiful ending that makes one sigh. keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your wonderful poems remind me of ancient verses of Renaissance scripture (if that makes any sense). It is very hard to describe, but you are an amazing poet, though I do not fancy reading poems, I do enjoy reading yours. They would be prefect for a prologe to a twisted fairytale or gothic literature.

I could read your work for hours.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The kiss of breath - a good play in a poem that expresses dark dreams and longings

Posted 12 Years Ago


A dark and wonderfully done write. I enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is dark and dreamy... I like.. well done!


Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem. In my dreams. Seem like I'm fighting someone always. Dreams are the doorway to life. Bad dreams mean too much stress and need time to relax and think. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Love this write, love the imagery, well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark picture of our hidden reality - Nice structure and vivid imagery as well. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ



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