A Place Called Home

Just something I whipped up last weekend. Hope you enjoy :)

A Place Called Home

My whole body screamed out in pain,

as i laid wondering how i'd ever stay sane,

I could feel my heart pounding in my head, 

as i tried to open my eyes and saw only red,

my cuts and bruises scream for the grave,

and I'm tempted to give them the death they crave

my soul longs for death, longs for an escape,

an escape from this cruel world, an escape from my fate,

but my heart longs for salvation,

longs to be free from this isolation,

longs not to feel empty and alone,

longs to have a place called home

Author's Note

can you guys give me any ideas on what to name this poem? I'm open for any advice

Reviews

[Empty Spaces]

bro i diddent know you could write like this, you should have told me! :)

[Sahara M.]

i thought you already knew. Oh well, now you know :)

[Gianna Y]

A Place Called Home would be a good name.

[Sahara M.]

thank you. i will change the title now!

[Ciara Di Salle]

This is very good! Maybe pull a title from the word escape, you used it a few times

[zainul]

This piece is really very nice.
You have frustration and feel like escaping the world.
But,your heart longs for salvation and a place called home.
Did you think of any title?
I may think if you really thought of any name.