Taste the Rainbow

Taste the Rainbow

A Story by Jared Kardos
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One of those Hemingway-esque six-word stories, 'cause I felt like it.

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Today it rained Skittles. Everyone Danced.

© 2008 Jared Kardos


Author's Note

Jared Kardos
Not sure if "rained" is grammically correct. If anyone can tell me if I'm right or wrong there, that would be splendid.

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"rained" would be the correct tense and usage. I've never danced for Skittles ... or because of them - yet I can picture it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I was not expecting something so Hemmingwayish and I liked it! Good read
It was colorful
Please excuse the pun. HA! That one made me laugh! HEEHEE
Anyway glad to meet you
Please come my way and read all of my things, I would appreciate it since you are so bored

Cheers, lea

Posted 15 Years Ago


I liked this. "Rained" is correct, by the way. Hemingway is awesome, is he not?

Posted 15 Years Ago


I believe "rained" is correct. I like this and let me tell you if it did rain Skittles, I would definitely be dancing. lol Great job!!!

Heather

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 11, 2008

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Jared Kardos
Jared Kardos

Avondale, AZ



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A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...well, actually it was the twilight of 1988 and in a hospital in Phoenix, I just wanted to add some mystique, so sue me. Anyway, in.. more..

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